I wrap my shawl protectively over my shoulders as I see a sign that may have directions. It's my first day in Salt Lake, and I think I must have gotten off the bus at the wrong stop. I just followed the crowd and ended up here. I would ask for directions, but I just came from Vietnam and my English is not good enough. I read the sign, understanding enough to know that it just has event dates on it, not directions. It's no use. I just don't know where I am. I linger at the sign, praying for the first time in years that I will find my way.
As I walk away from the sign, I am approached by two young women with name-tags. One of them has a Vietnam flag on her name-tag. They start to speak to me in English, but I say in Vietnamese, "I don't understand." The woman with the Vietnam flag starts to speak to me in Vietnamese. I tell her that I am lost, and she is able to help me. But before we part ways, she asks if I have a moment to come somewhere with them. I say yes; I owe that much to them. They bring me to a place with a lot of copies of a book, all in different languages. They give me the one in Vietnamese. The cover reads, "The Book of Mormon." The Vietnamese girl asks me if I will read it. For some reason, tears fill my eyes as I am filled with an overwhelming emotion. I tell her yes, I will read it. She then helps me find where I'm going and we part ways.
I am able to find my way to the apartment building I was looking for, and my day goes as expected from there. But somehow, I cannot stop thinking of the kindness of the young women, and of the book they gave me. I open it that night.
I LOVE IT!!!! So good!!! It brought me chills! That's probably my good critique! It really brought the Spirit and made me happy inside! :) The only critique I have (AAH, this is so hard, it was SO good!) is probably to just put a little more background into it... just a teensy bit more! ;)
ReplyDeleteI like how you had the power of just doing a little thing an affect people. Maybe you could have explained why she was so emotional about it a little more it was a bit sudden. Over all it was a great short story! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat writing, Elisabeth. I loved that the woman was lost, but obviously not lost to Heavenly Father. I think if you were to flesh it out more, I'd love to know why she was in SLC in the first place and what she thought when she read the BofM, but that's all a bit outside of the assignment.
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