James liked his special training. He could already feel himself getting stronger. His reflexes were getting faster. All in all he thought he was doing well. He saw Prince William approaching.
"Your getting better James," William said. "You should be sufficiently trained in no time!"
"I hope so," James replied. "I don't want to be stuck here forever."
"Am I not a good friend James?"
"Of coarse you are!"
"Well than enjoy the time you have with me while you can," William laughed. "You going to miss me when your gone. Haha!.
"When I'm gone?" James said. "To me it still seems like a big if."
"Have a little confidence in your self my friend!."
"I don't have a choice," James points out. "My family is here as well. If it was just me I would be more relaxed."
"Well, I have no doubt you will be fine"
Really good!!!! I can hear the separate character's voices in my mind which makes it super easy to follow! I don't know how you do it... but... ;p
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued by this bit of conversation. Are these two really friends? Or is there a double meaning here? I'm excited to see what you're going to write, William! I know I said we weren't doing grammar critiques yet, but I'm the teacher, so I'm going to break the rules. ;) Watch out for the your/you're stuff. If you could break it down to be you are, then the correct word is you're. (I only did a grammar critique because I couldn't think of anything else to tell you to fix.)
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